Subject: Promises promises
From: Troy
Date: Sun, July 3, 2011
To: Ken Adachi
I believe I sent my article/blog to your old address that I want to share.
Many of us like you are trying to help people and I am doing my best but limited in
knowledge on successful web sites as this is in my book.
Promises promises is the name of an article I created and want to share.
I hope you take a look at it and share it with others written in simple terms but
enormous in scope.
Take care
Troy
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Hello Troy,
I'm responding to your e-mail because of the sincerity expressed in your article and in your e-mail.
If you want to convince people through the power of persuasion using the written word, you have to acquire enough skill in grammar and English composition to accomplish that goal. If you want me to publish your essay, you have to present it with much more concern for accurate grammar, punctuation, etc. I'm not going to do it for you and I'm not going to post it in its current form.
Get an English grammar book (or a tutor) and discover for yourself what you're doing wrong and correct your essay, paragraph by paragraph until it looks like something produced by a competent wordsmith.
The next step is up to you.
Sincerely, Ken Adachi
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